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editing websites

2025 | Sixth Man Capital Website Revamp

Here, I tightened up the copy, added more direct language where appropriate, and made it more customer-focused; per direction, I removed basketball / championship references and made legally compliant.

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Live Revamped Homepage and About Page Copy

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View Original Homepage Copy

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View Original About Page Copy

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2016-2018 | QVC.com Today's Special Value® Homepage Copy

Edited the daily homepage copy for QVC's Today's Special Value® spot which was seen by over 100 million visitors and accounted for over $1.5 billion in sales per year.

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EDITING_TSV 6.11.18 D&Co A306777 Headlin
After + Feedback from eCommerce Team
Before + After
EDITING_TSV 7.16 A309686 Cuddl Duds Head
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EDIT Word_7.28 Fitbit Blaze Fitness and
After
EDIT 7.28 Fitbit Blaze Fitness and Activ
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